tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post1521047767422471680..comments2023-12-22T23:24:58.740-08:00Comments on Lorelei's Muse: SECOND CAMPAIGN CHALLENGE ~ A Vampire's ImagoLorelei Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-77890180306856437992011-10-27T13:29:44.479-07:002011-10-27T13:29:44.479-07:00Thanks so much, Red!Thanks so much, Red!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-50515557643964987082011-10-27T06:41:49.936-07:002011-10-27T06:41:49.936-07:00Best of luck, Lorelei! :)Best of luck, Lorelei! :)Red Tashhttp://redtash.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-90186653953858356372011-10-26T04:01:09.107-07:002011-10-26T04:01:09.107-07:00Hey, Julie, thanks for coming by and getting to kn...Hey, Julie, thanks for coming by and getting to know me, and I'm presuming you are my 97th follower--since I can't see my followers.<br />I'll come by your place later today.Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-11874801298917228172011-10-25T23:17:03.523-07:002011-10-25T23:17:03.523-07:00Hi Lorelei! Beautiful poem! And beautiful blog! Ha...Hi Lorelei! Beautiful poem! And beautiful blog! Happy Halloween and it's wonderful to get to know you during the Coffin Hop!Julie Jansenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08438397551211808123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-37335587861989902892011-10-08T18:54:49.736-07:002011-10-08T18:54:49.736-07:00Wonderful piece your use of words is very rich. Gr...Wonderful piece your use of words is very rich. Great job!!<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-25751168786840265352011-10-01T03:12:04.486-07:002011-10-01T03:12:04.486-07:00Thank, you Christine! And welcome to my world (:Thank, you Christine! And welcome to my world (:Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-54823541269579383562011-09-30T17:47:48.970-07:002011-09-30T17:47:48.970-07:00Vampire poetry. Awesome. Nice use of the words.Vampire poetry. Awesome. Nice use of the words.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-15792806055271025152011-09-29T13:13:00.401-07:002011-09-29T13:13:00.401-07:00Thank you to everyone who has stopped by and left ...Thank you to everyone who has stopped by and left a comment, and also to those of you who have joined my "followers". Be sure to stop by this October. I have a lot of fun things planned!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-28959861615440571712011-09-29T10:28:39.041-07:002011-09-29T10:28:39.041-07:00Loved the imagery and flow of this. Great job with...Loved the imagery and flow of this. Great job with the challenge!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-17211328091791214822011-09-29T07:04:37.954-07:002011-09-29T07:04:37.954-07:00Read it twice. Loved the imagery and the ways you ...Read it twice. Loved the imagery and the ways you used the words.Joellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05813055817755602200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-66675927714822307102011-09-26T15:04:45.398-07:002011-09-26T15:04:45.398-07:00Thank you David!Thank you David!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-8822478133206538602011-09-26T13:05:33.252-07:002011-09-26T13:05:33.252-07:00Nice one! This vampire fellow makes a valid point....Nice one! This vampire fellow makes a valid point. Very poetic prose. This entry has my horror vote.<br /><br />Great job, Lorelei! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-21401609131190494312011-09-26T02:59:16.742-07:002011-09-26T02:59:16.742-07:00Hey, KS. I voted for yours, just wanted you to kno...Hey, KS. I voted for yours, just wanted you to know.Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-8946321363769510492011-09-25T20:51:48.973-07:002011-09-25T20:51:48.973-07:00I liked "the hunter is like a ballet, in all ...I liked "the hunter is like a ballet, in all of its synchronicity"<br /><br />Very poetic. Good job.<br /><br />I'm #76, if you want to visit.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-64941743642187966662011-09-25T06:58:10.849-07:002011-09-25T06:58:10.849-07:00Thank you, Medeia, and good luck on your debut nov...Thank you, Medeia, and good luck on your debut novel!!!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-12250610144095156932011-09-25T04:15:35.235-07:002011-09-25T04:15:35.235-07:00I adore vampires and poetry, and I loved this vamp...I adore vampires and poetry, and I loved this vampish poem.<br /><br />Enjoy the rest of your weekend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-9625473679247506992011-09-25T02:25:04.304-07:002011-09-25T02:25:04.304-07:00Thank you, Bridgetstraub, and Sonia.
My comment a...Thank you, Bridgetstraub, and Sonia. <br />My comment above explains that, yes my spell check went *poof* and I didn't realize that it had. I simply went with the word. I am not changing this poem merely to fit the format, because I've spent too much time on it as it is.<br />Anyway, I thank you to everyone who has stopped by and made a comment. That's the whole idea behind this "challenge", and it has done what it was supposed to do. :DLorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-53597591193295975882011-09-24T19:22:11.219-07:002011-09-24T19:22:11.219-07:00Nicely done. As someone else said, vampires aren&#...Nicely done. As someone else said, vampires aren't my thig but this was well done. Mine is #29Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-71337881496077040462011-09-24T18:31:32.201-07:002011-09-24T18:31:32.201-07:00Pretty poem! I like how it flows. Can almost imajo...Pretty poem! I like how it flows. Can almost imajone this as a rap song. <br /><br />I am pretty sure the word is not oscillate. Must have been the spell check; when I wrote mine, word tried to turn into oscillate, too. Word's dictionary is deficient.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-44112481766954991132011-09-24T16:30:04.584-07:002011-09-24T16:30:04.584-07:00Thank you, Jen! I liked yours as well!Thank you, Jen! I liked yours as well!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-83804958678613801342011-09-24T13:52:04.035-07:002011-09-24T13:52:04.035-07:00"The hunter loves the hunted" - I love t..."The hunter loves the hunted" - I love this line! So much great imagery here! <br />Mine is #3.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-21264906969947373802011-09-24T12:48:42.110-07:002011-09-24T12:48:42.110-07:00Thanks F.E., your comment means a lot!Thanks F.E., your comment means a lot!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-59144827298074327402011-09-24T12:07:14.097-07:002011-09-24T12:07:14.097-07:00Yay! I love poems!
Your piece is so cerebral - th...Yay! I love poems!<br /><br />Your piece is so cerebral - the best kind, in my opinion!<br /><br />Great job!F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-36162351868021575922011-09-24T11:19:51.802-07:002011-09-24T11:19:51.802-07:00Hey, Joanna, thanks for your comment and your vote...Hey, Joanna, thanks for your comment and your vote. Hopefully the third contest won't keep us all up too late [; lolLorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-79093225340478623752011-09-24T11:03:14.371-07:002011-09-24T11:03:14.371-07:00Vampires stories are not my thing, but I truly app...Vampires stories are not my thing, but I truly appreciate your poem. I think these words do work well into a poetic format and you have created a strong voice here. It's not about winning, I agree, and this second challenge is taking me far too long. I shall, however, be voting for this one ;)Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00633484787634197878noreply@blogger.com