tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post7154662328122764023..comments2023-12-22T23:24:58.740-08:00Comments on Lorelei's Muse: THIRD AND LAST CAMPAIGN CHALLENGELorelei Bellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-69697335405588590142011-10-25T15:34:03.566-07:002011-10-25T15:34:03.566-07:00Thank you Maeve. I aim to spook and throw in the h...Thank you Maeve. I aim to spook and throw in the humor whenever I can!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-78253284195725391912011-10-25T09:02:50.051-07:002011-10-25T09:02:50.051-07:00Spooky! Humorous! Nicely done!Spooky! Humorous! Nicely done!Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-36781146708874658302011-10-24T03:58:43.813-07:002011-10-24T03:58:43.813-07:00Very nice. Dun dun duuuuuuun.
And I'm a ba...Very nice. Dun dun duuuuuuun. <br /><br />And I'm a bad person. I have to do mine today. <br /><br />-NellieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-37885443873378724412011-10-24T01:24:55.580-07:002011-10-24T01:24:55.580-07:00Spooky with a nice humorous touch (I always hate i...Spooky with a nice humorous touch (I always hate it when my wastopaneer is showing), good job.<br /><br />mood<br />(now following)<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a><br />no. 79mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-43986077935643298882011-10-23T02:42:44.384-07:002011-10-23T02:42:44.384-07:00Hey, Jessica, Thanks for becoming a new follower A...Hey, Jessica, Thanks for becoming a new follower AND leaving me a commet so I know who you are!<br /><br />And thank you for your comment on the little story above!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-40976646640522061132011-10-22T19:03:45.244-07:002011-10-22T19:03:45.244-07:00ooo....I like the surprise ending! Great story :) ...ooo....I like the surprise ending! Great story :) I'm a new follower. Mine is #70.Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-41423704343299394862011-10-22T06:10:05.527-07:002011-10-22T06:10:05.527-07:00Thanks Jen.I will go and check yours out today.Thanks Jen.I will go and check yours out today.Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-25060811969850401902011-10-21T21:24:43.631-07:002011-10-21T21:24:43.631-07:00Very atmospheric! Great job getting the made-up wo...Very atmospheric! Great job getting the made-up words to sound natural. <br />Mine is #25.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-20579895646281692692011-10-21T15:28:32.196-07:002011-10-21T15:28:32.196-07:00Thank you Sheri.
Thanks Anela. I like the idea s...Thank you Sheri. <br /><br />Thanks Anela. I like the idea she sensed something bad was about o happen.Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-79560583251091058102011-10-21T15:25:08.213-07:002011-10-21T15:25:08.213-07:00Love the addition of the sixth sense!Love the addition of the sixth sense!Angela Cothranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09243582290698922119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-24270140677990687252011-10-21T14:02:19.411-07:002011-10-21T14:02:19.411-07:00Oooh, an intriguing tale! Like how you used the w...Oooh, an intriguing tale! Like how you used the words, good job! ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-24526248184207056172011-10-21T13:53:07.566-07:002011-10-21T13:53:07.566-07:00}Alyssa, Jess and Miranda--thanks for the creepy v...}Alyssa, Jess and Miranda--thanks for the creepy vote (^;<br /><br />}Bridget--I know. I just can't keep the thing from showing, ya know?<br /><br />}Thank you Mel!<br />}Thank you K.T.!<br />}Heather, maybe we could jump on a flight there some time?<br />}David, thank you!<br /><br />THANK YOU TO ALL WHO STOPPED AND MADE A COMMENT HERE!!!<br /><br />I'll be around to catch you guys' entries soon!Lorelei Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03294047277447613989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-46360292122792359662011-10-21T12:47:56.306-07:002011-10-21T12:47:56.306-07:00You have an excellent beat when your characters ar...You have an excellent beat when your characters are doing something, and your dialogue is well played. Nicely done! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-33448896620401123312011-10-21T09:41:44.945-07:002011-10-21T09:41:44.945-07:00Chilling, especially the ending! I loved the littl...Chilling, especially the ending! I loved the little details, they made it so tangible and real that it felt like I was there.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-6299894988329737122011-10-21T08:51:49.102-07:002011-10-21T08:51:49.102-07:00Love the surprise at the end - great use of the ch...Love the surprise at the end - great use of the challenge words and really effective description. Really well done.K.T. Hannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477211734721721621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-8885645303100864902011-10-21T07:37:15.906-07:002011-10-21T07:37:15.906-07:00Excellent story and ending, great job!Excellent story and ending, great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-53150440505707519382011-10-20T19:12:50.114-07:002011-10-20T19:12:50.114-07:00I just hate it when your wastopneer is showing! Mi...I just hate it when your wastopneer is showing! Mine is #56Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-23332488141518028962011-10-20T17:56:07.256-07:002011-10-20T17:56:07.256-07:00Creepy ending! Love the surprise scary ending.Creepy ending! Love the surprise scary ending.Miranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-87940382350942230852011-10-20T17:34:54.970-07:002011-10-20T17:34:54.970-07:00Yes I agree!! Very creepy! Love it! Great surprise...Yes I agree!! Very creepy! Love it! Great surprise at the end. Wonderful take on the challenge :)<br /><br />I'm entry #5Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174503107986637805.post-91996868831255656152011-10-20T17:26:37.718-07:002011-10-20T17:26:37.718-07:00Oooh, creepy! I really enjoyed it, good job! :D
...Oooh, creepy! I really enjoyed it, good job! :D<br /><br />I'm entry #69Alyssahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08978921042324206592noreply@blogger.com