Well, I've been working steadily in my WIP. I've just put 78K words under my belt on Dhampire Legacy. Working right along, and happy in my work. I'll give you a bit of a tease here, in a bit.
How do you like the new header? Nice? I made this myself. I think it will work for me until I get a few more books under my belt.
Here I'd like to introduce you to Phil Green and Dr. Herb Ruben. They're just a couple of your average vampire hunters trying to find the vampire lair. This is from a later chapter, but I thought it was atmospheric. This is in a first draft, so there might be a few miss-spellings and such.
“You
sure you know what you're doing?” Herb asked over Phil's shoulder.
On his knees, Phil wiggled the pick in the lock.
“It's
a little rusty,” Phil said, concentrating.
“How
do we know this is the right mausoleum?” Herb asked, gazing out
across the cemetery.
“Because,
Mrs. Crunch said it was northwest from the mansion. This is the only
one in this area that it could be.” Phil switched to a different
picking device and shoved it into the lock, and jiggled it around.
“You'd
have been better off using a hacksaw,” Herb groused.
“If
you'd just quiet down, I might be able to do this!” Phil said
through gritted teeth. “Besides, we don't want anyone to know that
we've been here.”
“No.
I suppose not. They'll just figure out someone's picked the lock when
they come to see grandma and grandpa Miller,” Herb said, squinting
up at the name chiseled above the door. The door had an iron gate
over it. A padlock held it closed to those who might try and get
inside to desecrate.
The
lock clicked and opened in Phil's large hand. “Got it!” He eased
the padlock off the gate and opened the gates and examined the door
that closed the mausoleum off from the elements.
He
grasped an old latch, it opened under his hand. “We're in.” Herb
followed him into a five by twelve space. The walls were lined with
vaults. Most were occupied. This he had expected. They looked around.
“What
now, Sherlock?” Herb asked.
“I
don't know.”
“You
mean she didn't tell you how to get into the tunnel?”
“No.
I don't think she knew how. She only said that this was one way into
the tunnel.”
“Oh,
I don't believe this!” Herb said, hand going up and flopping to his
side making a soft sound. “You got me all the way here and you have
no idea what you're looking for?”
“No.”
Phil looked around, noticed a large marble urn with handles and
stepped up to it. He eyed it, walked around it and grasped it by the
rim and handle. “Won't budge.”
“You
mean you think there's some secret way to get inside?” Herb
laughed. “You mean like on some silly show where they find a secret
leaver, or something you turn?”
“Yeah.”
Phil looked at the piece of heavy pottery and now placed his hands on
the handles he pushed with one hand and pulled with another. It
turned with a slight grinding sound. “Oh, I think—” He grunted
and tried to move it further. Herb watched him, dubious.
“C'mon.
Help me! You push I'll pull.”
“Alright,
just let me put my cane down.” Herb put his cane up against the
wall and came back. He pressed on one large handle and pushed,
putting his weight into it, while Phil pulled on the other one. The
large marble piece turned again a quarter turn.
“That's
it! Do it again!” Phil encouraged. They pushed and pulled at the
urn's handles until they'd turned it to a half way point. Something
behind them made a grinding sound.
They
stopped and turned to one of the bronze tomb coverings to find it had
moved out five inches or so.
Both
men breathing hard, they turned. Herb grabbed his cane and leaned on
it, watching his larger friend move for the tomb three tombs up.
“How
did you figure out that it would turn?” Herb panted, and daubing
his sweaty face with a handkerchief.
“I
watched a lot of Wild, Wild West shows. There was one where they went
into a mausoleum and a blind girl turned something to open up a
secret compartment.”
Herb
shook his head, chuckling. “Which proves once again that fact is
stranger than fiction.”
“Strange
or not. I can't figure out what this is supposed to do,” Phil said,
looking all around it, top, bottom, sides. He ran his forefinger over
his thick mustache.
“Does
it turn?” Herb asked, moving up to inspect it. The tomb was level
with Phil's head, but the top went six inches above. He reached up,
hands flat to the sides, he curled his fingers around an edge
“No.
It's just a box, or tomb. I don't know what the hell it's for.”
Herb
chuckled. “Well, you opened it.”
“Yeah,
but why? What's it for? It has to be for something.”
“Is
there a body in there?”
“I
hope not,” Phil said and went up on tip toes. Unable to see inside,
he reached around. It was empty, like a box. “Wait a minute.” His
hand came in contact with something metallic, a leaver of some sort.
He grasped it, pushed and pulled until it moved, suddenly. Quickly he
pulled his hand out and stepped back, cautioning Herb to do the same.
The stone-on-stone grinding came from the wall.
“This
is exciting!” Phil said. “Almost like opening up King Tut's Tomb,
or something.”
“Or
Aunt Gabrielle's eternal resting place,” Herb said, watching the
whole section of wall move slowly out like a thick door.
“Now
that's innovative!” Phil said, peering through the darkness of the
opening. “Hey, there's some steps!”
“Wonderful,”
Herb said. “I'll stay right here, if you don't mind?”
“No,
no. That's alright. Let me get my flashlight.” Phil took the small
flashlight out of his vest under his coat. “You stay right here,
I'm just going to see how far down it goes.”
“I'll
be right here, twiddling my thumbs,” Herb said.
“Okay,”
Phil said, moving to the entrance and pausing at the top of the old
stairs. He turned on his flashlight, aimed the bright light down into
the dark mouth of the entrance. Cobwebs hung thick in spots. Dust and
dead bugs littered the stone steps. The reek of death rose to meet
his nose. “Ish, something died here recently.”
“Mice,
probably,” Herb suggested.
“Okay,
“I'm going down. You stay there. If I yell for help call 911.”
“Right.”
Phil
descended into the darkness, slowly taking each step as though it
might go out from beneath him. The walls of stone became brick the
further he went down. Finally he reached the bottom.
“Okay,
I'm down on level ground, here.” He shown his light around. The
tunnel led off, and he would have to bend down to walk through. “It's
a really cramped space. But it does lead somewhere.”
“Are
you going to investigate it?” Herb asked. “Because it's almost
four o'clock and that sun's going to set soon.” There was some
argument as to when a vampire is awake. Some said the vampire was
asleep like the dead during the day. Other said that the older the
vampire, the less sleep he needed, and was able to walk about even
during the day time, as long as he was in darkness, protected from
the sun.
“Okay,
I've got a watch,” he called up. “I'm going to go a little ways
in, then I'll come back.”
“If
you find King Tut, you know you've gone too far,” Herb joked,
looking down into the dark hole. He watched the light Phil held shift
back and forth, and then its brightness faded until it disappeared.
He turned toward the entrance, noting the shadows were advancing.
“Oh, hell. This is not the time to be checking out a vampire's
hiding place,” he said to himself, but held back calling to Phil.
He'd given him a warning. His heart pounded in his chest. My
blood pressure must be up...
“I need this like I need a hole in the head,” he muttered to
himself. I'm
supposed to be retired, and here I am poking into a tomb where a
vampire might be hiding. I'm gonna pay for this. I just know it.
Herb
glanced at his watch, looked outside through the open door of the
mausoleum. “Christ, come on, Phil.” Five minutes, then six ticked
by. He checked and noticed it had been seven minutes since Phil said
he'd come right back. Herb moved toward the shadowed doorway that led
outside. Fresh air filtered in, and he hadn't noticed until pulling
it in how dank the place was. It had been closed up, possibly the
oxygen levels had been low.
Herb
frowned, pulling in fresh air. “Holy cow.” The thought jolted him
into action. He hobbled toward the tunnel's entrance and yelled,
“PHIL! PHIL! CAN YOU HEAR ME?”
Nothing.
Not a sound filtered up to him. “Oh, crap.” Urgency caused him to
make his way down five steps, grimacing when pain shot up his spine
from his bad hip. He stopped and leaned on the wall with cane in hand
until the pain subsided. “PHIL! ANSWER ME!”
“Here
I am,” Phil's voice filtered up.
“Well,
it's about damned time!” Herb groused, watching Phil take the steps
two at a time like a teenager. There was a time when he had been able
to dart up stairs like that too. Not any more. He could barely go
down them.
“What
are you doing down here?” Phil said, stopping to regard him.
“Never
mind, just get me back up, will ya?”
Phil
took one arm, and helped Herb back up, mindful of his painful hip.
“The
sun's going down, and your horsing around in a vampire's lair,”
Herb admonished, moving to distance himself from the entrance.
“I
just wanted to check this out,” Phil said. “Wait outside, if you
want. I've gotta close this up.”
Herb
made his way back outside the mausoleum while Phil closed the
entrances up. He joined Herb outside and locked the padlock again.
“No
way I can make it back through that field,” Herb said.
“I
think I can sneak my Jeep over here. You think you can make it to the
edge of the cemetery at least?”
“Find
me a spot to rest for five minutes, and I'll try,” Herb said.
Phil
glanced around and found a fairly flat-topped stone, which had moved
and now leaned slightly. “Over here. Come on,” Phil said, moving
for the headstone. Herb gingerly walked toward the stone, and settled
himself down.
“Go
on, get the Jeep. By the time you make it over I'll probably feel
better.”
“Okay.
Just stay right here,” Phil looked around, and saw that the light
was fading from the day. He jogged away, toward the grassy field. It
took him half the time they took to walk it. He brought the Jeep down
a farmer's drive off the road, and drove straight up to where the
cemetery was. While he did another ambulance went by, coming from the
mansion. He hoped that the person inside would be okay. He wondered
if the police had any idea of what they were up against.
Probably not.
Probably not.
I like the excerpt, and the header's looking good!
ReplyDeleteThanks, William!
DeleteLoved this! Very clean. And wondering what kind of trouble these two will get into.
DeleteHugs and chocolate!
Well, thank you, Shelly! And I've got some good stuff coming up for them.
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